thegirlwhofateloves

Thanks for the (late) advice, but you shouldn't have put it up if you didn't want people to read it...

...Lol, ok...I'm going to write some stuff on my blog, for anyone who wants a vague understanding of this poem (after that, it's up to you to play around with ...

^ Sorry...I didn't think to.

..Yeah I've looked at the whole thing...personally, I like it how it is, even if no one else does, but I understand why it wouldn't make sense to anyone else. ...

:-s I feel bad for having to say this...but, honey...no. Really. Just...no.

=D> Fabulous work, darhling. :wink: Why can I never write anything constructive...*sulks*

Love it, CL. It's a little odd, completely beautiful, and it ignores some of the 'rules', which is great if done properly...which you have.

...It's ok. But you could probably do better? A stroke of blue and a spot of orange, visualize the sun and the ocean. A mist of black and a dot ...

^ Agreed. Nice poem, definitely - but a leetle tweeking needed.

was great, it hit the nail on the head, and I think that more than a few people will identify with it. Bravo.

Love flows...it's like a trail of thought, and I like it a lot :D

^ it IS good, though. Not amazing, but good. And it's different to a lot of the poetry on here, too, which is interesting.

I really like this...and I have nothing else particularly constructive to say :wink:

I'm intrigued.... But got no information, so can't help you there, sorry x

Can't really say anything, except that I really love this. It's quite beautiful.