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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mistakes

    Hey there :) I'm just passing through, I've decided to cut down on the size of my reviews, as I tend to waffle on very pointlessly, so this is gonna ...

    Aug 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Mountain

    Hey there :) I wasn't really planning on reviewing much tonight but your piece certainly caught my eye straight away, so I thought it would be rude not too! I've ...

    Aug 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The last day

    Hey scream :) first of all my deepest apologies for being kind of late reviewing this, I've had a lot on and have sadly been neglecting YWS recently. :( But ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there blackbird! First of all; I am so, so sorry that this review is so late. I've had a lot on recently and haven't been on much, I'm going ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Watching a TV of Memories.

    Hey there! I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :D I can't go down my normal road of correcting typos and grammar, ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Forget Me Not

    Hey there :) I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted Topic.

    Hey there Sakura :) I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today. Red - Mistakes ; Green - Corrections ; Pink - Suggestions ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Runaway Marriage - chapter 1 pt. 1

    Hey there Ofir :) my name's Eddie and I'm gonna' take a stab at reviewing this for you today. Red - Mistakes ; Green - Corrections ; Pink - Suggestions ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Decoy Dream [02]

    Hey there :) first of all, awesome SN! Secondly, thank you for my review. Here I am, with one in return! And thirdly, this piece had me within the first ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: In Love With The Enemy.Chapter 1.

    Hey there, my name is Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :) I'm so pleased I've come across another Twilight FanFiction, I'm ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The nasty three way

    Hey there! I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today. :) First of all I really liked the idea of writing about a ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Falling Sun 6.2

    Hey there :) I'm Eddie and I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you today. Also, this is review number two of Review Day! Before I even begin, ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Secret of Hidden Gardens (One)

    Hey there :) I'm Eddie, and this is my first review of Review Day, aren't you lucky! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Black Moon

    First of all, ditto what all the others said. I cannot believe you were 8 or 9 when you wrote this, its certainly impressive. And before I start I have ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fate: Chapter one

    I'm back! The prologue has lassoed me into the ring! Ahem, on with the review! Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - Suggestions Chapter ...

    Jul 19, 2010


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
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