thegayestwriterever

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Heya! Here's a review for you as your work caught my eye by the title! First off I would like to welcome you to YWS and I believe you will ...

Thank you so much for the suggestions! I take them kindly!

Lol! I've had blue hair before!

Please, your work is just as good as anyone else's!

I do apologize this is not one of my best works and I don't like this poem as much myself. I will definitely have a better piece out soon!

I love the repeating lines! It's like an echo being conveyed into a poem. I really like the lines: "I walked through the dark forest Sadness was in front of ...

I don't receive commentary in my work often so it's so nice to receive others point of view of what I can improve! Thank you so much for reviewing my ...

The is really nicely written! It's very descriptive helping the readers paint a vivid picture of where the story is taking place and what's going on. My favorite lines were: ...