thedevinhiggins

Hello! I have never seen a story like this before. This is quite possibly the most unique way to narrate a scene I've ever read. Here are some things I ...

Hello! First of all, this is an adorable story! I love the characterization and the imagery, as well as the plot! There is, however, one thing I would like to ...

Hello! First of all, I seriously love the imagery you used, and the way you described the main character! However, in this passage... "It lets in the sun that stabs ...

Hello! First of all, I can only imagine how hard it is to write a story in a different language, but you nailed it! I could perfectly imagine what was ...

Hello! First of all, this story is wonderfully written. It flows well, and the pacing is great! I also love the characterization, and the imagery is so vivid and beautiful! ...

Hello! First of all, this story has great imagery and characterization! It also has near-flawless pacing and transition! However, I would like to mention something about your flow. "He still ...

Hello! I love how you illustrated the deeper meaning behind the story. Wonderfully done! However, there are a few technical errors: "There was once a man who was walking. He ...

Hello! I love this story, not at all cliché; it's such a new spin on these kind of stories! I was engaged beginning to end, wondering when Alexa would find ...

Hello! I love the imagery in this story, along with the pace of the writing! I also love the way you structure the story to keep the reader engaged! However, ...

Hello! I love the way you depict the MC's emotions, as well as the vivid imagery. The story was so gripping as well! However, there are a couple flaws I ...

Hello! This story hooked me from the start! It was so riveting and engaging! I love how you pulled off the changing point of views! I also love the instances ...

Hello! This is truly a unique story. I love the way you voiced the character and let the reader into his mind. I also love the way the reader sees ...

Hello! First of all, I really like this story! I love how I was able to see the MC's thoughts, and her attitude changes throughout the work. Wonderfully done! However, ...

Hello! This is my first poetry review, so bear with me! This is a beautiful poem! Minus a couple flaws, it was beautifully worded and structured! There were some instances ...

Hello! First of all, I love the positivity of this story! It was so sweet and cute! I also love the plot and how it went in well with the ...