thedelphinater

This was good. Only two things I noticed were that each stanza should be the same length and that the beginning of every line should be capitalized. Other than that, ...

Ah, but he never got it copyrighted, therefore, it cannot be copyright infringement. But just for the heck of it... DISCLAIMER: Part of this piece (like one sentence) was based ...

Haha, bravo Skirt, even though I already read this. Technically I can't review because I already did. *Gasp!* And I think you took some of my advice, too!

Bleh! I'm too lazy to fix my mistakes. Besides, it's meant to be immature, stupid, sappy, goofy, cheery, whatever-y. Like, our writing styles are different I guess. I mean, to ...

Thanks to everyone for your comments. I fixed the punctuation and stuff, and I kept part of the note at the beginning to give people a sort of feel for ...

Well, you sort of get it. You get the first part, the anger, the frustration, the resentment. What you don't get is the having to hold it back, because everyone ...

Oopsies! Sorry if I offended anyone with the whole rating thing. My bad! And also, this was very emotional for me. But I think that if I didn't write this ...

This was good. The rhyming fluctuates, which makes it a little confusing, so I'd work on that a little. The rhythm was good, and I couldn't find any little nit-picky ...

To LOSO: Um, not quite what I was thinking. Actually, not to throw off your beliefs and what not, but I would technically be considered an atheist. Sorry. I was ...

Um, what the hell is this? If it was an attempt at serious poetry, no comment. If it was an attempt at humor, it's even lower than slapstick.

Thanks guys. Love you too.

This. Was. AMAZING!!! I was in hysterics the entire thing. I hated New Moon with a passion, and this just made my day. I couldn't find anything wrong with anything. ...

OK, punctuation Nazis, I'm not very good at grammar, but I added the commas. So thanks to Forever Threnody for helping me with that. And I will admit, that this ...

Wow. This is so completely random and ridiculous (and freaky) it shouldn't make any sense at all, but somehow, it does. I guess it makes sense ia=n a comedic way. ...