thedelphinater

Aw, this was sad, now I'm depressed. Though I did like the redeeming ending. Like, yeah Fia died, but her sister loved her enough tot let her go. Now, time ...

First order of business: the nit-picking stuff. OK, so it started out pretty good, but then you sort of seemed to lose interest or something in grammar and punctuation and ...

Wow, this poem was basically flawless. It had imagery, punctuation, grammar, correct spelling, correct formatting, and it was just well written in general. Ooh, I went back and reread it, ...

Ooh this was really good. Actually, I loved it. Not only was the writing itself good, but I loved the message. Favorite part: Today is all you have, Live it ...

This was good, I just have a few little nit-picks. First off, the stanzas should all be the same length. Secondly, the punctuation was a bit dry and didn't really ...

Ooh, first review! Don't I feel special! (coughs) Anyway, good job as usual. Your virtually flawless writing fills me with envy yet again. One little thing though: “True,” I said. ...

Hmm, let me think for a moment. (ponders) Well, most of the books I can think of are for adults, but teens can read them. I'm a big science fiction/fantasy ...

Awesome work, again. I don't think you;re moving the plot along too fast, and I like how the characters are turning out. I didn't think that the breakdown was random ...

*Random Side Note: Awesome name/photo. Loved that movie, though some parts made me queasy. Ahem, getting to the actual review. For someone who claims not to be good at poetry, ...

This wasn't that bad. For someone who doesn't write poetry, it could have been a lot worse. I thought the imagery was good, though the wording was a little off ...

Oh my goshness I loved this poem! I loved the tone and the concept and the words and just all of it! Ahem, *puts on slightly more serious face* now ...

Wow this was really good. Please keep writing more, because I really want to know what happens next! I couldn't find anything wrong so far as spelling and grammar and ...

This was good. I liked the whole concept, and except for a few little things, pretty much perfect. First of all, the beginning of each line needs to be capitalized. ...

Oh, nice sort of parallel. I'm not very religious, but I liked this twist on things. I'm kind of slow, and I got it on the fifth day. Anyway, I ...

This was good. Just two little things I noticed: Firstly, the beginning of every line has to be capitalized, even if you're continuing a sentence. Secondly, the flow and all ...