thecolorofthesky

If you want to experiment, I would recommend either starting all lines with lower case or just using correct punctuation. It looked like a mistake because only one word wasn't ...

I'm thrilled that you understood the very far off inspiration of repairing Japanese pottery with gold. I was intrigued by that. Thank you for your review. It made my day!

Thank you! I love your suggestions!

Oh! I gotcha!

Thank you Lumi! That helped A LOT! I'll probably be revising all day until I'm satisfied.

I've revised! Thank you for the review!

I'll be sure to fix that! Thanks!

Ah...the color of the sky.

Thanks, Kaos! That review was super helpful. The punctuation at the beginning was all messy and the old lines blurred with the new ones. I needed a new perspective. Write ...

I ended up changing the title. Let me know your thoughts.

Just wanted to let you know I changed the title. Hope it's better.

I changed the title. I finally found something halfway decent! Thanks for the review!

Thank you! That's a spectacular idea! I'll let you know when I edit.

This may be one of the best and most constructive reviews I have received! Thank you so much! I'm glad it turned out better than expected (for both of us). ...

Thank you for the review! Is there anything that needs to be improved on in it? Or do you have suggestions for a better title?