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Hi! I had seen this last night and made a mental note to check on it today when I was free. I love this concept for a story. I don't ...

This is a very smart, essay. And as a lover of politics and hearing other's opinions and thoughts I found this quite interesting. I love the sources that you concluded ...

Hiiii, Oh my gosh, okay. So first of all I LOVE an unreliable narrator. Your writing style is unique, it's....very cinematic. You use rhetorical questions, life-like banter, real life situations ...

Hi, okay. I wanted to say that this is unfortunately an experience that some experience, myself and you included, and I wanted to say you're not alone. You managed to ...

Hi, this is so honest and relatable. Especially the: ''birthdays blowing out the candles never feels the same in double digits.'' This is the kind of poem I feel readers ...

I instantly clicked on it from the short blurb and title. Although it's quite short it's incredibly rich. I admire your writing style, it's very haunting - in a good ...

Hi, okay. So, I can't really put a line down that I loved specifically as I love it all, and the lived-in way that a reader can see clearly. This ...

Ooooh, okay. So, first off respect for creating your own OC and adding some flair to the original storyline. I also think that you portrayed their hesitation perfectly, it really ...

First off, I love that this was inspired by TV girl. Second of all this poem's short but realistic. I love that you've written about SH because honestly it needs ...

Okay. I like it, it's an actual novel and although I haven't read the previous chapters (although trust that I will be doubling down reading with a cup of tea) ...

Wow. This is outstanding, and I mean it. You captured it far more brilliantly than I ever thought it was. Through your poem you manage to delve and dissect the ...

Okayyy, so this was so good. I LUUV it. I thought the topic of the poem wasn't a very commonly picked topic so it definitely gave your poem individuality. Also, ...

Oh my gosh. Okay. So I overall think it's amazing. I think the pacing is well written, you've also managed to balance complex vocabulary and integrate it into the story ...