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That's great. Thanks a lot. I actually wrote this over a year ago intending for it to be a short story. I'm currently writing a novel based around this scene. ...

Thank you. This is such an old poem though. I was much younger when I wrote it. These days I tend to work on what will hopefully turn into a ...

That's fantastic. Thank you very much; you made my day :) I'm really glad you liked it.

That's very kind of you. Thanks!! Yeah, when I was writing the poem I wondered about the way the lines were used. I think you might be right. I'll have ...

Wow, thank you for the review. It means a lot :)

Thank you very much. You're my first reviewer! :) Yeah, when I was writing this, I did some really weird stuff with the layout, and so it was interesting that ...

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Yeah, the relationship between John and Jessie is supposed to be something that literally cannot last, hence why it's written the way it ...

Hey, thanks for the review. I'm glad you pointed out some good points about developing the characters more, I definately need to do that. In general though, I'm trying (whether ...

Hey, thanks for the review. I'll definately work on the characters some more, and hopefully this will help future readers. John and Jessie's relationship has been written purposefully to be ...

Thank you everybody for your great reviews. They are really appreciated.

I really, really liked this one. Even though there's not that much imagery, I was fully immersed in the scene. I think this one appeals to nearly everybody because nearly ...

That really is a great story. I was trying to work out what it was and then saw the review. That's actually really quite clever, its like a riddle.

erm, yeah. i think so, ive just checked and they had it.

really good, i got what you were saying. but like the other comment said, you need to find a way to make the repetition work

This really was a good write, liked the amount of description you put in