tgirly

Thanks for the great review; I've got some editing to do on the poem but I'm glad you like the mood of the poem.

Thanks for reading it and the wonderful comment! :) Really appreciated it.

I'm not anti-capitalism; I agree with you there that since we live in an imperfect world, of course our system of economics is going to be imperfect and capitalism is ...

Please pm me if you ever post a third chapter; it might take me awhile to get to it, but I'd love to keep up with the story.

A well worded reply; I love the paradoxes of this poem; in its message, as well as in the lines themselves. A beautiful poem.

I like this poem; I like that the topic is poetry itself and its place in the world. I think the line that is most memorable/evocative from this poem is ...

Thanks for the review; really helpful advice! I'm glad you could connect with the characters. -tgirly

Thanks so much! Love your avatar.

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you caught the characters being foils for each other, and your advice is really, really helpful. Especially with the bad batch of coffee; I ...

Thanks so much! I've been on YWS for a long time, and this probably ranks in my top 5 most helpful reviews. Really sound advice. :)

Thanks so much for the review! It's really helpful, and thanks for the well wishes. :)

Thanks for the review; it was really helpful!! :) I'm trying this new thing where I try to make my poems more personal and include more personal experiences in them, ...

I love the line 'You deserve a Grammy'. So sassy. I think the repetition of fool, while a good idea, could be done more strategically. There's a lot of emotion ...

Thanks for the comments; I'm so glad that you could connect to the work! :)

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. It means a lot to me that you could connect personally with the poem and all of your advice was really helpful. ...