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I like it, though I don't completely understand the last line and I feel like it could have more rythm. Another great poem by Cammie. I think you should have ...

I love the poem. Inspiring. The only thing is, you spelled occasionally wrong. Other than that, I love it.

What do you think youR doing to me.

It started off a little slow, but I kept reading it because I like your voice. It's very fitting to the type of story you wrote, and I like that. ...

Wow. This is sooo sad. A little too sad for my taste. But some people like that. It's very dramatic.

I'm not sure unable makes grammatic sense, the way you used it, but other than that, I liked the poem.

I like your voice and imagery. I think you should break it up into more than one stanza. It's a good poem and I like it. I think you could ...

I kinda like math (because I'm good at it), but I liked this poem anyways. My only critic is that I think loath is spelled loathe. I'm not sure, though.

It's sweet and sentimental. I can't really think of any critics.

Wow. That's deep. I think you should make the text a little bit smaller, but that's just me. I love the last paragraph. I agree with Shinobiinfinity, it is inspiring.

You should put it into story mode so it's easier to read. It's really creepy.

This is sooo sad. My heart ached, and I almost had tears in my eyes (I would have if it was longer.) Please PM me when you get the next ...

I like it, though I feel it could be longer. Also, maybe you should break it into a couple of stanzas instead of just the one.

Jesus loves you, even when you disrespect Him like this. He died on a cross for you anyways.

I get it, and I like the poem a lot. I like how it goes with your avvie.