tgirly

I do like this; I don't normally like stuff like this, but I like this. However, I don't feel it's completely 'stand alone' material; I feel like it's just part ...

Good job jumping into the action right away. However, at the beginning at least, I think you need to work on some of your details; you start to describe the ...

Oooooh! I do like this one better! It's got more substance. Wonderful rhythm and the meaning's great too. The only thing I'm not sure about is why for the majority ...

The concept behind the poem (as well as the poem itself) is really quite beautiful. I think 'lethe' should be capitalized, since it's the name of a river. I'd suggest ...

The middle part was awesome. The middle part flowed, had beautiful imagery, and was just in general gorgeous. The beginning I didn't like quite as much. "She washes away the ...

This was so beautiful. SO. BEAUTIFUL. But, onto the actual review, I wouldn't call it a 'collection' which would make me think that there's multiple poems while this reads as ...

I thought my two years of high school Spanish could get me through the Spanish part. Yeah, it didn't. I knew about thirteen words, if you count and, the, and ...

The ending of the second stanza felt a bit abrupt, probably because all of the other stanzas have four lines while that one only has one. I love the mild ...

Oh! I like this poem! It's a great concept, and you've definitely got a really great, dark tone going here. However, there are a few problems. I know it's for ...

There were a few typos in here that were a bit distracting, such as 'rejoyce' and 'seclucsion'. I'm also not sure what you meant by the line "Let the give ...

It was refreshing to read something with sufficient detail in it. Beautiful prologue; it was everything I could ask from a prologue and more. Very, very well-crafted. You're style reminds ...

*Gasp!!!* Great cliff-hanging chapter ending!! (Sorry for the over-use of exclamation points.) Besides that, I'm not sure what you mean by 'She was still the same" because after that, you ...

I'm not sure if there's a chapter one to this or not; if there is, you've got to put it in the right folder so people can find it, if ...

Wow! You've got some great writing here; sounds like the piece is really interesting. I love the imagery of the piece and the sense of worry, but in the first ...

In the first line, you have "across the sky" and then in the third you have "across the sky" again. I'd change one of those. "As puffy white clouds float ...