I thought my two years of high school Spanish could get me through the Spanish part.
Yeah, it didn't. I knew about thirteen words, if you count and, the, and a. But the meaning of the poem is still quite beautiful; it's pretty short, but it still has beautiful imagery to it. REALLY beautiful imagery.
I don't quite understand how touching something could help you learn to see something, but maybe that's because I'm as deep as a pond sometimes. Besides that, there's really not much to critique, besides the length. I do love short poems, but I feel like this one needs a bit more; it doesn't feel fully complete. That might just be me in my pond-level deepness though.
Sorry if this review wasn't really helpful. Really beautiful poem though; keep writing.
From the Flaming Keys,
Happy Review Day,
-Tgirly
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