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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Thanks so much for your review, I appreciate you taking the time to offer such thoughtful suggestions and insight

    Feb 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Last walk

    No problem! I like that you edited those lines in. I think the idea of filling someone else's shoes despite being unable to "rest easy" is very powerful; it's a ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Hi Mahvash, thank you so much for your review! I'll take your suggestions into consideration when I go back and revise; I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Thank you for your kind words

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you liked it!!

    Feb 21, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Thank you so much for your feedback! Very helpful review and I appreciate the time you took to look into my piece

    Feb 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: In the Halls

    Hi Lav, thanks so much for your review

    Feb 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: In the Halls

    Super late to seeing your review so I'm sorry about that!! But thank you for your feedback; I'll probably go back and make some edits to this particular poem because ...

    Feb 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In the Morning Sun

    Thank you very much for your review

    Feb 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In the Morning Sun

    Thank you so much for your feedback

    Feb 4, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Grandmother

    Thanks so much for your feedback, it was very helpful and it was also nice to hear that the twist at the end was interesting and actually worked out. I ...

    Feb 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Grandmother

    Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a thorough and helpful review of my short story here. I definitely take full responsibility for not ...

    Feb 1, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: delusions of grandeur

    Thanks for your review! I'm glad that quite a few people found the title to be interesting -- it was actually intended to be ironic because the actual definition of ...

    Jan 31, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: delusions of grandeur

    Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it

    Jan 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Always

    Thank you so much for your review!! Very thoughtful and helpful. I'll definitely check out the link you included in terms of specificity. Wording and structure are definitely aspects of ...

    Jan 26, 2020


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