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This is a very powerful poem and the underlying message is made more impactful by your repetition of the word "oh". I feel like this specific word expresses a certain ...

This was a very easy to read start to what I hope is a longer novel project of yours! I like the narration, and I just want to say that ...

Hi! Jumping in with a review here. First things first: I like that this is a concise, straight-to-the-point poem that employs imagery effectively. I particularly like the line, "More beautiful ...

Hi there! Just wanted to jump in and leave a review for you because I loved reading through this. First off, as another reviewer mentioned, the opening lines of the ...

This is a very lovely piece to read, and aside from some grammar and spelling errors, you seem to have a good foundation for storytelling and weaving an interesting tale. ...

You have a wonderful mastery of imagery, which is what makes this poem so interesting and engaging to read! I particularly like the lines "A jaw of metal encapsulates your ...

I like that this poem effectively communicates the sensations of longing but also slight desperation -- the way you use commands rather than questions makes this clear (or perhaps I'm ...

I love so many aspects of this poem that it's hard to decide what my favorite part is! First off, I want to say that I genuinely enjoyed the usage ...

Hi there! Popping in for a review. Right off the bat, the first thing that caught my attention about this poem is the structure, and I personally like the way ...

This is an incredibly interesting prologue to read, and I love how well you implement imagery. The first paragraph in particular really made me feel like I could physically feel ...

This is a very nice, concise poem that I found brought out a lot of holiday-esque feelings/scenes in my mind. The idea of making rolls and sleeping all day during ...

This is a very powerful piece that I feel does a good job of outlining a conversation topic that, unfortunately, a lot of people aren't comfortable or open enough to ...

I love the mixed feelings of nostalgia, envy, and reflection that are embedded within this poem. On my first read, these particular lines stood out to me, mainly because I ...

Right away I fell in love with your poem because you implemented a second person POV rather than first or third; this is always interesting to me because it feels ...

This is a very lovely poem that actually evoked a few memories from when I was nineteen myself, so I applaud you for successfully drawing out emotion from your audience! ...