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Very good, I like this opening and I am impressed with your style. You draw very clear images of a gloomy environment. It could use some revising though, a little ...

ADOPTING DIVERSE SCIENCE FOR CULTURAL DEVELOPMENT mELVIN D. bANGGOLLAY Science is development. It has paved the way for the generation of new concepts, ideas and processes to initiate reform in ...

That Night That night that was filled with pleasure has brought me so much pain. That minute,that moment,that hour of fun has made me feel so much regret. The love ...

Hi there, I am not the best at grammatical nit picks. I am good at voicing my opinion. You give the reader a nice glimpse of imagery with the burial. ...

Hi Hawkie! I have to say your writing detours me from my own creative writing. Lucky for me and my self confidence I cant help but to write. You should ...

You have written an excellent introduction in my book. What books are you reading? I am sure you are reading Dean Koontz or the King, because your intro was bestseller ...

I have to say, Love the title. It is said to not judge a book by its covers, but how else to do we choose what to read here. The ...

Beuno! I like your poem. It has a good voice behind the words. Like Audy said. it is walking the line of being superfluous. I think you are very capable ...

This was written in the kitchen. Am i right? I'm right. Right? Before I hit the last line, I was in in the kitchen you sent me to. Then I ...

Honestly, I started reading this yesterday and was somewhat bored. Maybe it was the intro, or perhaps my lack of sleep. Either way I am sorry for not giving it ...

Wow, I think you have an awesome voice in this piece. This is great. I loved the emotions and the simple setting. I really think this is the best poem ...

"Wise men speak when they have something to say, fools when they have to say something." -Plato I think you should elaborate on this. This is a great topic to ...

Hello, I like the title. I think you should keep writing with this idea! It sounds like Catalina(like the name) is imaginary? I love traveling the world! I have been ...

I like this piece. No matter the route we choose to pursue, obstacles will be waiting. How we overcome the trials is the our story, assuming we don't stand still ...

Hi, I am a little confused by "Dark oblivian stares cruely back at me." and how it relates to winter in this poem. You have some grammatical and spelling errors ...