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hello Gracie. beautiful imagery, and i love the phrase 'dead summer'. keep writing.

Short. Sweet. Simple. Keep it up. :)

ten minutes! that's cool. i love the simplicity and the creativity in the poem. i also love the rhyme (i kinda missed rhyme because recently i'm writing free verse lyrics ...

hey. this is going to be quick: i love the imagery, how you portray the scene, i love how i can actually see what is happening. nice play of words ...

this will be quick. i definitely loved your lyrics. keep writing. :)

rl, sazza, and rockstar. -thanks so much for the motivation! i appreciated it. :D yeah, i've been thinking about changing the lyrics, something like that. i'll update soon. :D

this is cute and somewhat funny. i disliked math as a child, but now in college i'm taking up accountancy. haha. i love the words you used. :)

hi, lily. thanks for appreciating. of course we all have different ways of expressing ourselves, so i appreciate everyone's comment here. actually, i kinda disagreed with what jedigeek said, but ...

thanks for appreciating it. :) it made my day.

hey, shaken. nice words. maybe you'd want to make a song out of it? just thinking. :D keep writing and stay motivated. -telle.

Short. Simple. Lovely. Keep writing. :D

I liked the imagery in these lyrics a lot. It gives the audience something to think about instead of just complaining about your heartbreak. I appreciate the poetry of this ...

You have a very beautiful way of writing. I like it alot. Your lyrics almost tell a story and it could be such a beautiful song with the right music. ...

Hey, The Lyrics sounds like they should be sung by someone like Taylor Swift. They are quite good love-ish lyrics. No critisms for them, but at the same time, they ...

I had to take my guitar and sing it :O i great melody. Do you sing your self? i think the ending goodbye was kinda pointless. over all the thing ...