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For those people who are confused about the gender, it's a girl. Girls reassure each other about looks all the time. Anyway, I didn't really like it. It seemed rushed. ...

I liked it and I didn't like it. It's a love hate thing. I like your set up but I also don't like it. It's very nice. It's well written. ...

Okay, so here we go. Honesty, I was a tad bored. The concept has been done over and over. It's overused. You're writing is actually pretty good but I couldn't ...

Personally, I am a figure skater which makes me a lot more critical of it. The ideas are there, they're nice but where's the passion? As a skater, I've always ...

Okay. I can't think of much to critique actually. I liked the plot directoin, even though fantasy isn't normally my forte. But I do actually like it. There's just a ...

It stuck with me, but I don't understand what's going on. My perception was that were displaying someone in a hospital (you talked about saline) who so depressed because of ...

I liked it, I did but I have some questions. First, I get that Oliver and Luna slept together but the thing that confused me was whether or not it ...

At first, to be honest, I didn't get it. But then I kept reading. Although I normally don't like scattered works, this one worked very well. Schizophrenia changes a person's ...

I liked it, it was simple and nice. I was sort of disappointed that there was no Jacob though! I love the energy Jacob adds to scenes with his humor. ...

LOOOOVEE IT! There's only a few things I'm wondering, one does Ely know about it or something? I didn't really understand the whole truck thing. Did Ely just see it ...

I liked it. Normally, I would say to elaborate but here I don't think it's needed. I think you made it short and sweet. I liked that part of it. ...

The way I saw it, it was a story of a girl who got kidnapped by a stalker. She tried to get away but he kept at it, torturing her ...

I loved it. I totally related to it. I don't really understand how you were also a hypocrite. Could you explain that? The other thing I wanted to say was ...