take3breaths

note: for some reason it wouldn't let me do stanzas, but it was supposed to be 4-line stanzas, so imagine breaking it up every 4 lines

This is such a cute poem! Though depressing it is extremely relatable. Toast and tea are things that aren't only source of comfort at times so this really is right ...

This is such a good poem for such a short one. I really enjoy this style of writing. I do not have any complaints though I could consider maybe using ...

Thank you so very much and I will consider your critique

Really? Thank you!

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the constructive criticism and will keep it in mind for my next poem. And I find your review really interesting because this is my ...

YES! THANK YOU!

thanks, i"ll work on it!

Thanks! and yeah, i left it lowercase for a more muted tone.

:)

reminds me of the fault in our stars! this poem is from hazel grace to augustus!

finally, a positive poem! how sweet and true this whole thing is. we take it all for granted. Kudos to you for positivity!!

the poem is very good, yes, but did anyone else reading this feel their stomach drop when they read the last stanza? but a good poem is a good poem ...

thanks! And actually, i would like to leave the last line open for interpretation. your observation, however, was very on point. thanks again!

WOW! love how positive this is ( kidding by the way)! i must add though, not much passion is present in this poem. is this from a first hand experience, ...