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Re: God
Hello obscureoracle! I'm syz and I'll be reviewing this piece here using the Review Monster! created by the lovely @/Avian! :) The Glowing Eyes: First Impressions! What’s that glowing thing ...
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Re: where is my edward rochester ?
Hello theotherwoman! I'm syz and I'll be reviewing this piece here using the Review Monster! created by the lovely @/Avian! :) The Glowing Eyes: First Impressions! The first thing anyone ...
Aug 29, 2025 -
Re: I'm Cold
Hi Oakley! Pol here with a review :> I'm a huge fan of horror, it's definitely one of my favorite genres to read and write in so I'm really excited ...
Sep 11, 2024 -
Re: The Star Children
Hiya! Pol here to review this piece. I love this! A journal surviving thousands and thousands of years, different generations writing in it to showcase how life on earth changes ...
Sep 8, 2024 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 4
Hiya Chem, Pol here once again with a brand new, shiny review just for you! Let's dig in, shall we? First off, I want to say I'm impressed with how ...
Sep 6, 2024 -
Re: Je t'aime. (I love you) - 1
Hi Kaavya!! Pol here to review your story! I would like to start this off by saying I believe this is a script and should probably be put in the ...
Sep 5, 2024 -
Re: Blue Vapor
Hellooo Queue! I'm Pol and I'll be reviewing this piece here using the Review Monster! His bark is worse than his bite, but mind his tail as he doesn't always ...
Sep 5, 2024 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 3
Hi again, Chem! :> Today, I'll be reviewing this chapter with the Review Monster! He's just a silly, goofy guy who likes chomping on stories. The Glowing Eyes: First Impressions! ...
Sep 3, 2024 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 2
Hiya Chem! Here to review the second chapter of this story, no fun and silly template this time unfortunately. Going to get this out of the Green Room for you ...
Sep 2, 2024 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1
Hello, Chem! :> Today, I'll be reviewing this piece with the Review Monster! He may seem scary but don't worry, he's all bark and no bite. The Glowing Eyes: First ...
Sep 2, 2024 -
Re: THE FIRST supreme god, odin.
Hello Rover, I've noticed your work sitting in the Green Room for quite awhile, let's get it out of there today, shall we? I'm a huge fan of Mythology and ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Wishful
Hello watercolours, nice to see someone who puts a ‘u’ in the word colours haha! I don’t typically review poetry simply because of how abstract it is, which makes it ...
Mar 1, 2024 -
Re: Overview
Hiya Wren, belated welcome to YWS! This story seems very interesting, I’m hoping to see if you post any more of it. Poisonous mist is such an intriguing apocalyptic setting, ...
Mar 1, 2024 -
Re: Nothing is wrong
Hello, Polt here with a new review and a welcome to YWS! Without further ado, let's begin, shall we? The first thing I notice is that it's short and simple. ...
Feb 25, 2024 -
Re: The Adventures of Rose Hood Chapter 1: The dragon and the wolf
(No template for me today, just going through with my thoughts.) Hello Keep (can I call you Keep?), I'm Pol and I'll be reviewing your work today! :D Honestly, I've ...
Feb 22, 2024
