sweetcapris

I actually liked the vagueness of this poem. It gives it a lot of sincerity. I could really see it in the bit about the radio and a laugh turning ...

I personally loved the ending. I thought the sentiment got stronger as the poem progressed. You've also used some very effective repetition, which is good! The only part that I ...

Well I'll have to disagree with the previous critique. I think you successfully shed new light on a maybe-fairly-worn-down topic. Your sincerity and complete trust in future love had me ...

Well, like everyone has suggested so far, I think this poem is adorable and creative and overall a really lovely story. I think what would really make it better though, ...

Wow, this is really great! I love the not-overbearing intimacy you've weaved though out this piece. I love love love the line about his lips continuing their assault, that was ...

I have to agree with the reviews already given. While the emotion is undoubtedly clear within the poem, it seems at times to just be a string of ideas... for ...

This is beautiful writing! It is so fluid, so elegant, and so soft. But just when I was really into this melted vat of elegant language, the line--- "the clarinet ...

It’s 3 a.m. and a spell is cast. The book flips open to a sacred past. The verses lift themselves in perfect grace; Revealing the meanings behind each face. A ...

I liked the bit about "that would bring me down, but I'm already there" The dark cloud image fits pretty well. I feel like the beginning is a little too ...