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Re: To Maggie
I love this! It's so simple, yet so sweet and meaningful. I liked how you used easy-to-understand diction and syntax, allowing any reader to get it without bombarding them with ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Hold your own hand
First of all, we share the same name. It's funny because I never meet any other Sophies, but when I'm on writing sites or other creative sites (tumblr haha,) there ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Coming From a Stranger
This piece is beautiful. I understand that you come from a view that may be seen as cynical or rude, but I think it's magnificent. So many people want to ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Why do you sit by the window?
I love the conversation between two inanimate (well, maybe not inanimate) things (well, maybe not things haha.) It's cool how you make them speak to each other, and make it ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: fallen leaves have stories
This is fantastic. I love the sensory imagery and the poetic elements. Your use of nature to convey emotion is beautiful! I also love how you use line breaks. I ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: If words were watercolor balloons
I love the meaning behind this. The fourth and fifth lines really brought me in, and made me truly believe that this is a well-written piece. I like the way ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: The Most Common Lie
It's the simple things that mean the most. The simplistic nature yet staggeringly meaningful context is breath-taking. I love when writers make "nothing" into "something." I'm not saying that this ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: To My Ex
Sometimes it's the simple things that mean the most. I love the simplicity. I feel like there is so much more behind it, but this is all you needed to ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Are You There?
This is a great piece! I can really tell how honest you are being. It seems maybe un-edited or unrevised, but I'm sure that just came with the fact that ...
Feb 4, 2014
