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  • Poetry » Review, Romantic Re: To Maggie

    I love this! It's so simple, yet so sweet and meaningful. I liked how you used easy-to-understand diction and syntax, allowing any reader to get it without bombarding them with ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Romantic Re: Hold your own hand

    First of all, we share the same name. It's funny because I never meet any other Sophies, but when I'm on writing sites or other creative sites (tumblr haha,) there ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Coming From a Stranger

    This piece is beautiful. I understand that you come from a view that may be seen as cynical or rude, but I think it's magnificent. So many people want to ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Why do you sit by the window?

    I love the conversation between two inanimate (well, maybe not inanimate) things (well, maybe not things haha.) It's cool how you make them speak to each other, and make it ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fallen leaves have stories

    This is fantastic. I love the sensory imagery and the poetic elements. Your use of nature to convey emotion is beautiful! I also love how you use line breaks. I ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If words were watercolor balloons

    I love the meaning behind this. The fourth and fifth lines really brought me in, and made me truly believe that this is a well-written piece. I like the way ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Most Common Lie

    It's the simple things that mean the most. The simplistic nature yet staggeringly meaningful context is breath-taking. I love when writers make "nothing" into "something." I'm not saying that this ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    Sometimes it's the simple things that mean the most. I love the simplicity. I feel like there is so much more behind it, but this is all you needed to ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Are You There?

    This is a great piece! I can really tell how honest you are being. It seems maybe un-edited or unrevised, but I'm sure that just came with the fact that ...

    Feb 4, 2014


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