summergrl13

It's cute, even though it's depressing. Sorry, no time to edit, but I basicly agree with meggy and octo! This is good for your first piece, and I really like ...

I liked it! It was mysterious and chilling. I don't know why but it kind of reminds me of the movie 'Prom Night'. Still, it's a good story so far. ...

Thanks! I'll do that! 0(o.o)0

I should probably explain that! Thanks for pointing that out too!

You'll find out why her father doesn't know where her sister lives and a few other details. But thanks for the court suggestion! And also, he hasn't been sober in ...

Everybody always gets to good novels before me so I don't have much to say :.(! I really liked it and everyone already covered the basic edits for me. So, ...

I loved this! Too cute! You totally captured that kindergarten atmosphere perfectly! Nice job! I'm excited to read more from you!

Wooo! Yeah!

I liked but I have to ask: since your name is david2oo8 are you david in the story?

You write stories like this and you've only got one star?!?!?! I loved your story and I think you should be at least a speaker of the forum person;)!! Seriously ...

I can't stop reading this story over and over again!

This is so sad and I'm so sorry that you had to live with someone like M. It brings tears to my eyes just thinking about it. 0(o.o)0 (My end ...

This is really good and sadly, really sad. I loved it! You've got a real gift for fairy tales! 0(o.o)0

I really liked this poem! It was just amazing! Don't stop! 0(o.o)0

I really enjoyed this piece Snoink! This is awesome and I hope that you'll be writing more sbout this! This was pretty unique and mysterious as it left me hanging ...