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Hi Em16, I am here for a review ... So let me first point out some mistakes which you made. 1. When you are writing you should know how to ...

hi SofieR, The start of the story made me read it... "She woke with a start, gasping for air as if emerging from a long trip underwater. Everything was all ...

Hi diphylleia, Your piece of writing was wonderful and i was touched while reading so. It seems that you have been heartbroken . Somebody you loved either has cheated you ...

Hey,madisonsperkins, It was really a wonderful story. I know its really hard for the people who are not blessed like us. Its really hard to go to school and see ...

It was really a nice poem based on a good theme. The lines were extremely wonderful but there were chances of writing more about this topic. I loved the lines ...

Hey,@RudraAbhinav I really liked the theme of the story and I also got an idea on how to describe things. And yes I would like to introduce. I am from ...

HI crimsonrose06... Welcome YWS ! Nice to meet u and i hope u will enjoy here. So lets come to the point, So The things I liked were that: 1. ...

Hi Stellarjay... Though I have read many poems like this but I enjoyed your poem the most. I liked these lines...."The land begins to flourish with marigolds and daisies alike." ...

hi Ayushinav I think ur story was great ! The beginning of the story was amazing. I loved the way u started narrating the story from a classroom. this is ...

Hi ... I really enjoyed this poem very much... it really conveys true facts . i loved the way u started "i fell in love with a stranger through bits ...

hello ehte92 ! I am here to review... at first I would just like to say that I love horror stories and there a very few stories which i have ...

Hi Quinee... I think that ur poem was great ! I have never came across such beautiful poem . I think that though the poem was nice but at some ...

Hi zc927... I found this poem amazing. every line u mentioned was true for an artist. the way u narrated your poem was fabulous ! An artist would alwaays think ...

I loved ur poem vegaslights but i think that u could have add up some more points to ur poem. like u told about the rights u could have also ...

Hey ! hi I loved Your poem . it is so amazing specially the line , " wish the happiness would take off its coat..." its an amazing line and ...