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stygianmoon17

stygianmoon17

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Riddle

    Hi there, thanks for reviewing my riddles ! For the piano part, I actually did want to talk about something else than the keys to give clues, but I'm not ...

    Mar 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: An undead phobia

    ohhh okay. Well if you're planning on writing a second part to this, maybe you could clear all of this a bit. I guess it makes sense, but it's just ...

    Mar 21, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pad Jumps

    Wow that changed everything xD

    Mar 17, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Cool Nights: Part Two

    Ohhh got it. Maybe you could make a quick conclusion to it all..? I was thinking the last chapter would be of us seeing them like fifty years later, with ...

    Mar 17, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Cool Nights: Part Two

    wow they come out fast 0-0 thanks for tagging me !!

    Mar 17, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Cool Nights: Part One

    I actually also looked up Kaen but I didn't really get why his name was Fire %uD83E%uDD14 You've chosen really cool names tho ngl

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are lost at sea, lost in our own minds

    Heyy there, here for a review :D I have no idea what a abecadrian is, but I suppose it’s something where every line starts with a letter of the alphabet. ...

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: little snail

    Heyy yeah that's what I was trying to say !! It's also a complaint on how people believe they're not good enough or strong enough to help others, so they ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: little snail

    thanks a lot for the review !! Yeah I wanted o have this be a pretty straightforward poem, I'm not really the type to sugarcoat what I'm trying to say ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1- The Queen

    ohhh alright makes sense lol, looks really interesting, like Descendants but if the "evil side" was actually self aware xD

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: Imaginary Friend

    argh what is it then 0-0 I have no clue

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Riddle

    Dude how did u do it xD u got all of them right %uD83D%uDC4F

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Addiction

    yesss now I get it !!

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 2)

    It definitely is xD and I'll go check it out right away :D

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    Thanks a lot for the title, I'll definitely check it out :)

    Mar 7, 2021


they got that magical iridescence that you don't expect to be on a sky rat y'know
— Ari11