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Re: Reaching for They and Them
Wow this was incredible It was really well-paced, and the short sentences and stanzas just make this all the more effective. I personally can't relate to your problem, but I ...
Mar 30, 2021 -
Re: The Ascension- Chapter One
Hey there ! stygianmoon17 here for a review :D Aidene Vesper always knew she’d die young. She just hadn’t quite expected it to happen at the ripe old age of ...
Mar 29, 2021 -
Re: Feelings
Hey there :D May I ask why you're leaving YWS? And by the way, please don't excuse yourself for posting stuff, it's okay to pour out your heart sometimes, and ...
Mar 29, 2021 -
Re: Seeds of Corruption
hey there ! This was a great little short to read, I was invested along the way and just loved how things are starting to develop and really, I found ...
Mar 29, 2021 -
Re: A (Totally Not Evil) BakeSale, Act 4
Why do I feel like the cookies were poisoned.. 0-0 This was a really fun script to read !! I usually hate reading scripts as it's basically just dialogue, but ...
Mar 29, 2021 -
Re: Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1
Hey there, here for a review
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter Two (Revised)
Hey there
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter One (Revised)
Hi there, I promised you a review, so here it is :D I'll try and be as specific as I can on everything so you can polish this work to ...
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: My feelings is going to be the death of me
Wow 11 seconds ago First ;) I'll put a little list of typos here Did I tell you'll this before, right? I can't be save The bold format was pretty ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 11)
Well that was depressing Everyone has talked about pace and typos and character development- so I won't dwell on that. Instead I'll talk about that ending. Finally ! That dude ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: When investigation becomes difficult
Hi there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D We were expecting a visitor at 9 a.m. Exactly when the clock struck nine, there was a ring in the doorbell. I ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: An undead phobia
Hi there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D "It’s a cool day and the sun is shining mildly over city streets." What is a "mildly shining sun"? I think you ...
Mar 21, 2021 -
Re: Pad Jumps
Hi there, hope you're having a great day/night/afternoon/evening/morning/.. ! Hmm I know Haiku's have mainly something to do with structure, like it has to be three lines, but for the ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: Cool Nights: Part Two
Hi there, hope you're having a great day/night ! The changes were very clear, the shifts between point of views was smooth with the -x- symbol. That was really the ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: Cool Nights: Part One
Heyy, @stygianmoon17 here for a review
Mar 15, 2021