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wow, this is beautiful and gives a whole new depth to the story of cinderella. I really like the progression of the stepmother from sane to evil and the way ...

Wow, this story is very interesting, I'm definitely fangirling over it a bit lol ;) The only critique I'd say is the repetition of the table, bc I'm pretty sure ...

Wow, really loved this story!! It was very intriguing and well-written, especially the dialogue. I cannot wait to read more!! I also really like the main character and how he's ...

Wow really good poem. I could really understand the strength of your emotion in the way you wrote. My favorite part I'd have to say is the way you tied ...

Ok, lol, I've read this, quote, unquote, Amazing poem, and I have to say it is pretty great. The idea is fabulous and the perspectives are very cute. When I ...

This is a good story, I really liked the progression and the heartfelt theme of it despite the setting it's in. One thing I'd change is the repetition of words, ...

Lol it's not that bad, I adore the structure u use bc ik it can be hard to make it look so nice, like wow it's amazing. And the idea ...

Wow, this story is amazing, I love it. You pack so much into it but illustrate it so beautifully. I like how u start without telling the reader that she ...

So I lovvveee the idea here, and the sense of attraction and popularity you accurately describe with the people you call candles. It's a Brilliant metaphor that you've nailed marvelously! ...

Wow, this story is so creative, the descriptions used are Marvelous, I loovvee them. They drew me in and I just had to read to the end. They are some ...

Aw omg this is so cuttttteee wow :D i love the descriptive language esp. when describing the mailbox, and the way the different types of mail are presented. The end ...

Haha omg, I love this XD. It's so cute and shows the depth of the friend's relationship in a light and fun way. The rhymes especially compliment this piece, and ...

Omg, this poem is so true! And the metaphors are beauuuttiiffuull, they're so heart-wrenching, and they fit perfectly