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Hey... This poem is amazing. I did really enjoy reading it. The punctuations and word choices were on point . The imagery was vivid. I like the buildup from the ...

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Well-done Em16. This was an interesting piece. It was beautiful to read and I feel every teenager will relate effortlessly. I particular liked the imagery, the metaphors were vivid and ...

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This is an interesting piece. I like the imagery, and the message was well passed across. It's colorful, it's real in every sense of the word. However, i think it ...

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Hey Introworded, I just can't pass by without dropping a little review.. First observation: I like your title, one of the most important elements of any poem is the kind ...

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Hey Introworded, I just can't pass by without dropping a little review.. First observation: I like your title, one of the most important elements of any poem is the kind ...

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Hello Eros... I really enjoyed the poem, i liked the flow and the rhymes. The Imagery created here is quite fascinating as it is possible to visualize the events taking ...

Hello Lives4Christ24 I am impressed with the simplicity and flow of this piece. The diction was directed at all kinds of audience, and it was not ambiguous or difficult to ...

thanks a bunch

thank you so much, such an inspiring review, i hope i won't let you down, and i'll try to keep writing better works

wao! Absolutely amazing work, it's very beautifully composed. The choice of words are perfectly made and poetically used. you were able to pass across the message about who you love ...

thanks alot Remington

thanks alot herbgirl, i really appreciate your review. about the first four lines, it's a whole stanza of it's own, it's the spacing that was messed up, and the rhyme ...

thanks alot i really appreciate the review, i'll work on the corrections where necessary..

nice work, it's quite inspiring..