stephndek

Hi there, Steph on the review, First you have some great potential..keep reading and writing and that style works for you. You don't need to name some things, like here ...

hullo Steph here for a review, First of all this is a powerful story and its engaging once i started i had to complete it... Your diction is good but ...

hi there, wow! let's talk this piece, the preview was a bit of a spoiler, you could have let us figure it out..but its cool.. i like the point you're ...

wow! That's a nice story of a memorable day, lemme review a bit, I like the way you use the one word sentences , it shows that you're excited or ...

hi there, i wont say much but you have a good story going on here, your description is vivid and especially the scene with the wolf and the tension at ...

hi lbw, kudos for keeping on the story...using Carter's POV is worth the effort and you could use it again. I have a few things to say,I hope they are ...

nice love or should i say heartbreak poem. In spite of the rule breaking sentences i should say the mood comes out even in the first two lines and its ...

That's some no sweat narrative and thanks for the Italian. kirashimishize kyane!..(its so interesting!) “I don’t know who you are, but it would be in your best interest to leave ...

I like the athletic style, it allows for some continuous reading and somehow i don't have to step over the punctuation to get to progress with the story which is ...

The way you play with the sky and its elements and the imagery is really ..different, in bits it doesn't try to make sense which is a plus. one occupational ...

i like the character you use in this story. He is a confidence short character with habits he is ashamed of like thumb sucking. and he nurses an idea that ...

great stuff!! first of all for a person who doesn't have a life, Gertrude is alive far more than some folks. This reminds me a bit of the Angela Devine ...

i'm not forcusing on the technical stuff,but the story,i know this is picked from someone's life it could be anybody.... i think this girl is coming to terms with her ...

One thing about talking to the dead is that we don't expect any response...I think human beings get a kick out of that. If the dead were to reply I ...