starrynight89

Hello, Just here to drop a review! :) General comments: Personally, I felt disconnected from this piece, especially in the beginning when the boy asks for her number. It was ...

It’s strange to think of how a person can wake up one morning expecting their normal, dreary day-to-day life to be exactly as it was yesterday. You head of to ...

Personally, I dislike the series as a whole except for Twilight. New Moon just went on and one about Bella's hole in her was so melodramatic and the way she ...

He slowly made his way through the crowd and towards a gray building In it contained his small apartment that he rented with his meager living. The door slid open ...

Hey Proky! Stopped by to leave a review :) I reckon this is either the beginning or an excerpt. You had a lot of description but it wasn't boring to ...

Hey newbie! First off, welcome to YWS, hope you learn a lot and read a lot! My darling Lilleth, I will be home by 10:00 o’clock tonight. Dinner is in ...

'lo overeasy, just dropping by to give you my two cents :) Before I start, I should mention that I haven't read the other chapters so this might be largely ...

'lo Azila, Just dropping by to review :) My bubble of idle thought is burst as the electric school bell rings, sharp and metallic , like an alarm clock. The ...

David and he spent their whole life together. Since they were twins it was difficult for the system to put each of them in separate foster homes. They began in ...

B ehind the mountains , the midnight blue waters float under the full front of the waters , a wooden dock sits. There , a girl sits. About the age ...

'lo Squallz, Posting a extremely delayed review, sorry 'bout that! Anyways, on with it: You've go a great plot line and your characters are well versed. Waverly and Bellamy are ...

Excitement quivered like a trembling bird inside her chest and danced, tingling[s] , [/s] out of her fingertips. Her hands hovered , undecided above the keys. The hint of a ...

Yeah I agree with summer. I could actually hear this as a song. Good job!! Each verse is pretty well thought out and things weren't just thrown in there for ...

Dying Dreamer The sun set[s]s[/s] and darkness will cover the sky {This sentence has tense issues, it would sound better if you reworded it: The sun was setting and darkness ...

La la la la la la la... The forest was quiet and the only sound was a {Since we've never met the child, it should be 'a' instead of 'the'} ...