stargazer9927

This was beautiful! And I think a lot more people can relate to it than you would think, even if they don't realize it. You're truly an amazing poetry writer. ...

I loved the story line! This is the kind of stuff I love to read about, rather than fantasy and other things that couldn't really happen. I noticed a lot ...

I can give you some tips on how you should divide your stanzas. There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Away No matter how much I pray ...

Hi! I've come to review part three. I'm following you now in case you didn't know that so I'll get the chance to read the entire novel. You could say ...

Okay, first things first. You can post this in the novel section and then edit the novel info. Then the entire novel will all be chained together and it will ...

I'm debating on how I'm going to review this, because I don't usually review things like this. I thought it was a good story and very well written. It was ...

What exactly is the purpose to this song? I think it's a beautiful song and you are an amazing poetry writer, but what exactly is lighting the torches? I feel ...

Nice poem. It flows nicely and it just sounds great. There were only two parts I thought could be edited: Until it nipped the very sky… and What would you ...

Beautiful! I can think of tons of people I've met and seen that fall into this scenario. It's kind of a sad story though. This reminds me a lot of ...

You know there is a such thing as flash fiction. It's a story with under fifty words. This might come close to something like that, although I'm not quite sure ...

This was an amazing poem for being a spur of the moment thing. It was truly beautiful. I totally know where your coming from with your parents. My parents never ...

I can see this as being possible to both continue it and also to keep it the way it is. I'm not sure if you planned to make it into ...

The number one problem I saw with it was the capitalization of all the sentences and the spelling errors. But I loved the idea and the meaning behind it. It ...

I figured this was about you since you said it was for your father's birthday in the spoiler. Making your writing personal is really cool. But if this is all ...

I've never reviewed fan fiction before, so let's just see how this goes:) Well I actually like Pokemon. But I like the older ones better than the newer ones. But ...