spottedpebble

Wow! What you rewrote sounds so good! I'll totally be using that as inspiration when I eventually rewrite this poem. :)

I would love to hear people's suggestions on how to improve this poem. It is a work in progress and needs a lot of work. I couldn't figure out how ...

Okay, thanks!

Okay, that last line makes sense, thanks for explaining it to me! Looking forward to see that future poem someday. ;)

Thanks for the feedback! I was unsure how to make the two so's clear to read and I hoped that someone would have some good advice on how to fix ...

Good to know, thanks!

[center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is a story about a girl named Emily who spread a rumour ...

:) I did use well and so twice in a row because I liked the way it sounded when I read it out loud, haha.

Thanks for reviewing my poem! The use of capitalization is that I was turning some things into proper nouns to show the things I noticed most in the moment I ...

(dead end as in dead end street, not X__X dead)

First off, welcome to YWS! I also joined today. I can tell a lot about your style of writing poetry since you published a collection with three poems in it. ...

I actually wrote this poem right before I wrote Biking Past the River, on Hills on the evening of July 4th, when I was going for a quick bike ride ...

:)

This is a poem I think everyone needs to hear.

Hey, no shame in venting to the moon. Celestial bodies can be surprisingly understanding. :)