spiral

All I have to say is wow. This is really good, it's written really nicely and taking inspiration from real life events and making them horror oriented is awful, but ...

I am back again for another review. I liked these two chapters! The story has been really interesting so far, and I'm already rather invested in it. Now time for ...

Hi hello, I want to start by saying that this is really good! Its short and to the point, and its very nicely written and I love how poetic your ...

Hi hello, spiral here. So I rather liked this chapter, it was short and to the point. You could definitely find a way to draw it out, but it's good ...

Hi hello! I'm going to start by saying that I enjoyed reading this. It's rather nice, I like the pacing of it and the story itself seems interesting. Now time ...

Hi hello, i am here to give you some feedback! So overall, I think this is really nicely written, and I like the concept. I like the characters and their ...

Hi hello, I liked this story, it's short but really nice despite that. The pacing is a bit odd, as in there are a few things you could focus on ...

Overall, I really like this. The concept is really interesting! Now for some feedback. In the 3rd paragraph there's the line "...it's all part of our gods will." and this ...

I really like this concept! I like the way you started it off, how it was only dialogue. It was simple and made sense given the context. It might add ...

I really like this idea, personifying the Sky and a Cloud, I love the way you went about writing this ! One thing you should be mindful of is either ...