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Ok, thanks for posting this, it was a blast! I AM LAUGHING MY BUTT OFF NOW!!!

Ok, first of all thank you so much for the great review.You are absolutely right in everything you said.Your suggestions make this piece better!!Thanks again, for your time!

Thank you so much for your review!!The part about river banks is indeed flows more smoothly as you said.

Hey there and thanks for the review! I will agry with you for the most part, since I felt the same things when I reread soon as I wrote it ...

Um, no you weren't harsh.I like the things that you have pointed out, and I will certainly try to improve the language as you say.You also talked about some metaphors, ...

Thank you so much, for taking a minute to check this out! 'drawn' is indeed supposed to be 'drown', thanks for pointing that out :) I really wish to evolve ...

That is a nice song!I would change some words here and there, but anyways it is good!I can imagine piano chords to it!

I want to make this a song...can I?please....

That one reminded me of a poem I once wrote in greek, similar to this teacher said that it was good and she published it in the school paper.I didn't ...

obviously I amde a tremedous mistake, posting my work as a comment!!

Preface “Romeo. Quite an unusual name for someone to claim its ownership. It is surrounded by a very prominent hint of tragedy don’t you think?It is appealing though.Not only does ...

Ok, the first sentence was why I wanted to read it(and the title)the last one made me realise that it was worth it.I would really like to have the kind ...