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Re: Hope. (first draft)
I wrote it based on all the terrible news recently. Thank you so much for the lovely reply and for welcoming me!
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: Hope. (first draft)
The fluency does need work so thank you and I probably will try to fix that
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: My friend and the motive
yay!
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: Out on The River
thank you! 1-Juliet is a common name, yes I did realize but I kind of wanted her to be "just another girl" in a way 2-the great dane description is ...
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: Out on The River
Thank you so much! And who needs notes? Not me...haha
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: The Roof Top- first draft! please review so i know what to improve
Thank you so much! I definetly could add more in details to Emma when she is sleeping or comes up and more to Belle when she is sitting on the ...
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: keep your eyes to the skies, my love
I LOVE THIS. It has such an amazing message and it has amazing imagery. I have a question though- Are you trying to encourage everyone who reads this? or are ...
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: To Slay a Dragon
A couple things! 1- It's really well written! There isn't a lot on the dragon though! it was super fast and I wanted more! 2-it flows so amazingly! everything connects ...
Nov 2, 2018 -
Re: Seen: 12:39 AM
this is super good but more description would make it more insightful! its really good though!
Nov 2, 2018