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Re: Hope. (first draft)
I wrote it based on all the terrible news recently. Thank you so much for the lovely reply and for welcoming me!
Sat Nov 03, 2018 5:21 pm -
Re: Hope. (first draft)
The fluency does need work so thank you and I probably will try to fix that
Sat Nov 03, 2018 5:20 pm -
Re: My friend and the motive
yay!
Sat Nov 03, 2018 1:03 pm -
Re: Out on The River
thank you! 1-Juliet is a common name, yes I did realize but I kind of wanted her to be "just another girl" in a way 2-the great dane description is ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:40 am -
Re: Out on The River
Thank you so much! And who needs notes? Not me...haha
Fri Nov 02, 2018 10:33 pm -
Re: The Roof Top- first draft! please review so i know what to improve
Thank you so much! I definetly could add more in details to Emma when she is sleeping or comes up and more to Belle when she is sitting on the ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 10:24 am -
Re: keep your eyes to the skies, my love
I LOVE THIS. It has such an amazing message and it has amazing imagery. I have a question though- Are you trying to encourage everyone who reads this? or are ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 1:12 am -
Re: To Slay a Dragon
A couple things! 1- It's really well written! There isn't a lot on the dragon though! it was super fast and I wanted more! 2-it flows so amazingly! everything connects ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 1:00 am -
Re: Seen: 12:39 AM
this is super good but more description would make it more insightful! its really good though!
Fri Nov 02, 2018 12:54 am