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Thank you! I mix up words and misspell stuff all the time but I didn%u2019t notice the sore comma. Now that I read it, it is weird!

I don%u2019t really know love either since I%u2019m 14 but this is a guess! Anyway thanks!

I am not the best at spelling but thank you!

Thank you! I was thinking of adding in an element at the end of a part twoish thing about her bullies but I wasn't sure?

thank you!

Thank you! it being in chronological order really helps!

Thank you! The little suggestions will definitely make the story better!

thank you so much for the review! this will definetly help me improve! :)

I just fixed some of the early mistake but the walking back to car is actually a different person. I%u2019m going to try to make that more clear but thank ...

Thank you so much! The little rewrite is amazing! I did not think about putting in the page texture but I%u2019ll definitely put that in!

Thank you! I%u2019ll definitely rewrite part of it to more sense to the reader

Thank you for the review! Everything you pointed out makes alor of sense! I%u2019ll try to fix it. Thank you!

Hi sophie here to review! ~ First sections!-this really captures the feelings of getting out of bed! I remember and feel both sides! It’s so relatable and that just makes ...

I think words are some of the most powerful things in the world. We can use them to make a difference. And that%u2019s what I intend to do.