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I liked this! Tell me again why it's rated 'R'? I don't get it. looked pretty good as far as grammar and punctuation...a thing I found: Adam held his arms ...

I'm on my way to a performance so no time for an in-depth crit now, but I can tell you that i really, really loved it. It was awesome. Not ...

Need I say it..,all right, I will. Here I am yet again ! Good action, etc. Exciting read! *echoes all Reenjaygay said.* (that's greenjay in latin. the urban latin, used ...

Here I am, once again *singing* Um...overall, good. AGain, I'm a little lost since I haven't been able to read the whole thing, but I trust I can still crit ...

This is sooo good! Your ideas are really good. I hope Cadenza doesn't get too far, though...curious as I am about Cello and Viola. Would it be too much to ...

Retail store...tee hee... Overall, I thought it was cute. Not great, but cute. It's hard to explain. OH! I like your "1/2 n 1/2" name! That's such a random name, ...

I really liked this! The piece was very cute. I thought it was interesting how, even though it's in first person, you developed the 'Hannah' character more than the 'I' ...

Well, here I am! I couldn't find some parts of the story, but in the parts I did read, Poor Imp and the others gave such in-depth crits...there was nothing ...

Sounds good but for the mustard. Sorry, but I hate mustard *gag* Have you tried it with some egg, too? Egg and tomato go well together. I'll try your recipe ...

I like this a lot! Once again. Um...let's see. One awkward part that I didn't like: "Regaining reason, Sam told Anna to wait a few minutes while she finished helping ...

Ha! I like this. They are very intelligent seven year olds, and Evie is bitter for one so young! It seems like she would be more confused and bewildered than ...

Hee hee, I have a character in a story I'm writing named Dominic. I like it so far...I take it this is from the middle of your novel? If it's ...

I liked this! Congratulations on a piece well done. I do agree with what the others say, but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless. Did you say there was more? Lead ...

*tee hee* don't worry, I didn't get the impression that they were eating him. I really liked the story, and besides the whole discussion about age, it was excellently done! ...

I like this story overall. However, I think it may move too fast. You've just started to introduce Roberto's jealousy, and suddenly he's kissing her? I don't think it's too ...