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Firstly- Welcome to YWS :D (I noticed you were new) Secondly- You really should have reviewed two other pieces by other people before you post your own, and that continues ...

Alright, I always try and try and fail to find something critique-able in your pieces and it never works! I thought your characters emotions and personality were shown brilliantly. It ...

Hey Miffles! Really, you should have reviewed two works before posting something of your own. It just makes sure that everyone gets critiques and it will make people more willing ...

I loved reading this. It was fantastically well written, I loved your style, and some of it had me in tears. There were a few bits which I didn't like ...

Hey! Alright, so I'm not really good at critiquing poetry, I just like to read it so I'm sorry I don't really have much to say that's constructive, there was ...

Hey Kaila! :D Overall... I loved the subject matter of this piece and i enjoyed reading it a lot. I think it's because it reminded me a lot of myself, ...

I absolutly loved this book. I picked it up and couldn't put it down. It completly hooked me from the first page. I think it was the different, if slightly ...

Hmmm I have mixed feelings about this piece. I loved the way you started it. It hooked me and made me want to finish reading. But after this part: But ...

Hey Castles :D First of all, welcome! I can see that you joined recently and I'm sure you'll like it here! If I'm being completly honest with you, there wasn't ...

I loved wuthering heights. i love most of the old classics like that, and i think the brontes are definatly some of the most talented authors ever. Elimear - I've ...

you need to have reviewed two other pieces of work before posting something of your own, so maybe go back and read the rules for this forum? it just makes ...

overall, i really liked the idea of this, but there were a few things which i noticed. i think a lot of it is just me being picky though. There ...

i really like the way you ended this. Most stories that ive read like this one end in a really over-done cliched way so i was pleasantly surprised by this ...

i really liked this. i would like to give you an amazing constructive critique like you did for me but the only thing which i would have changed (just in ...

i have to say i started reading these books and didnt like them at all, but that was about 4 years ago so since you all love them i might ...