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Re: The Dreams of a Reject
Hi! I really liked this poem! It flowed really nicely and the idea was something pretty much everyone thinks about all the time or at least once. This piece told ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Crying in Silence
Hi! I could easily feel the raw emotion and power in this poem which is always a good sign and something that I love to find in poetry. You did ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Light the Torches
Hi this is Snickerdooly! I liked this poem and the creative way you spelt "lite," but there were a couple things that I didn't like. The first thing was the ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Only Natural
Hi! I liked this piece a lot it definitely showed a different style and topic/opinion. I'm just going to recap real quick on what you wrote and what I understood ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: .
Hi I'm Snickerdooly! Welcme to YWS I hope you love it here as much as I do! Some of the time I never get any reviews on my pieces but ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: French Teacher from Hell
Hi! I liked this piece a lot, it was really funny, and I could easily see your feelings of anger and emotion in this. The similies and metaphors were really ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to the Dark
Wow I loved this but I have a really funny story. So the other day I read this piece and I was like oh my god this is amazing so ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: The Deranged Bibliophile
Hi!! I loved this poem so much it made me smile with the biggest and brightest smile! Thank you for that, I thought this poem was really good with the ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Never succumb
This was really good I loved it and I don't want anyone to take this in a bad way but I like stories like this that tell about someone being ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Not So Quiet After All
No!!! This does not suck at all, I have read and written far worse. I actually enjoyed this I thought it was really simple and true. I always wonder what ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Broken
Wow this is a great poem! I love the way it is sad and heart wrenching, I can relate to this poem in almost every sense and judging from the ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Guardian Angel
Hi guys! I really liked this poem it flowed really well and the rythme in it was really good. (Edits in red) The only thing that picked at me a ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Cornelia Who Was Sneaky
Wow this was great, really it was. I loved the way you write your poems with morals so smooth and interesting, sometimes you read a rythmin poem and you can ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: churning desire
I like the idea of this poem and the strange format not often seen, but I don't think that these 24 words give a good clear meaning of what your ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: ---
Okay I thought this was really beautiful and truthful, sorry for my pathetic attempt to gain a review but I did not see any nit picks that bothered me in ...
Mar 12, 2011
