snickerdooly

C ries lurk every room , S uicide around the corner , M addening , W anting this to end , W hy? W hy?! T he wonderer ' s ...

Hi! Snickerdooly here to review! :) It's me Who like a burglar Leaves your house Covered in The velvety softness Of an early morning And the lingering smell Of your ...

I've got stresses up to here, This part sounds a little strange, not sure how you could change it though Constant whispers in my ear Keep my grades high, keep ...

Hi! I really liked this poem it was creative and unlike a lot of the other poems that address gay/lesbian relationships. It was very refreshing to read and gave me ...

Hi! I enjoyed this poem a lot I thought it was really creative and it flowed very nice. But the only thing that I think you should fix is the ...

This was really amazing! I was also sexually abused by several members of my family, here on YWS I've tried to write poems and stories in order to help me ...

I thought this was filled with tons of emotion and anguish, I liked the format of the poem and the description that was inside it. The only thing that you ...

Hi, I thought this piece was stunning and beautiful! I could feel your pain, joy, and pre-game jitters. But unlike some stuff that the other reviewers said is that I ...

I thought this was really cute! Corrections in red, comments in blue. There is an emptiness deep down, below the sad face and frown. (This is my favorite stanza :)) ...

Hi, I loved this chapter it was a big key in the story because you finally found out the extent of Ashling's powers. Other than some spelling errors and the ...

Oh my godddd.............. I'm crying right now this was really incredible. The emotion in the letter was so strong and overwhelming, then the end note was amazingly creepy and made ...

Loved this poem, it was a very creative way to rant. Yet it was poetic and beautiful :) Haha I'm not going to say that I've never worn short shorts ...

Sorry that I do not have a proper review, but I loved this chapter it was filled with many emotions and I extremely enjoyed reading it. I only saw minor ...

I don't have a review to give you, but you don't need one anyway. I just wanted to say that the way you told this was simply brilliant and really ...

I really enjoyed this poem though it did not have a main idea or core (I think that was the point :)) It defininitly contained emotions and feelings. I could ...