snickerdooly

Okay I really liked this poem but is there really a definition for cliche, can it be certain topics or what? If you feel up to explaining you can message ...

Wow I thought this was really interesting and had a great story and a different way about it, the only thing is you need to read through it a couple ...

Hey Snickerdooly here, I really liked this poem it had a lot of feeling in it and great descriptions! I think you should have it rythme a bit more to ...

I really liked this piece it had major thought and meaning to it! (My edits and comments are in blue) In time, they say, all will come to an end. ...

This was a good poem and it flowed very nicely, one thing that you should work on is giving more details or insight into what is happening in the poem ...

This was really good I enjoyed it a lot, the piece ran very smoothly and was really humorous and sounds like exactly what I'm doing right now. Oh yes I'm ...

This was really good, it flowed really well and the ryming was really good. I didn't notice anything about the ryming that was forced or bad which is really good ...

Wow so beautiful, and very true. I enjoyed this poem very much I love it when writers post unorganized pieces that are long but still interesting. Great work on this ...

I really enjoyed this, I loved the way you created a french poem and then put it into english. Though I know very little french because I am only in ...

Wow I really like this piece! You did a great job planting a picture in the readers mind. My only suggestions are in the parentheses below. Poison kisses that taste ...

I really enjoyed this poem, the moral of the story is something that I deeply beleive in so thank you for posting! This was actually pretty simple written and you ...

I like this, it has a very good idea and dark twisted side to it. Some of the rythme is a bit forced and so I think you should go ...

I liked this a lot and thought it had a really simple flow to it that made it very poetic, but the only thing that bothered me was some of ...

This was really great! I loved out it was so vividly described in detail and similies, also I understand where you're coming from in this writing piece and I hope ...

This was really interesting and I could definitely feel the motherly love, the way this was written was very smooth and clear, I also loved the idea for it. Sorry ...