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I loved this! It speaks so many truths. The vocabulary drew me in and I wanted there to be more! I loved the layout of this. I think its well ...

Really good grammer and great words! i actually think this is an amazing poem and your a great writer! i love the rhyming tecniques............ I think you are an excellent ...

really good :) i love this... It gives out good feeling and expression and explains how much people are really feeling! Sends out good messages to all those that have ...

I love this. Its excellent and so lovely. love the punctuation and and the structure. Its really good and please post more stuff and give everyone the pleasure to read ...

This brang a tear to my eye! Made me realise how unlucky people are not to have dads. Its quite sad really. I love the poem and how it is ...

Really good use of structure. Use of words and also use of excellent punctuation. Your a good writer and should post more of your excellent work. I would be delighted ...

this is good. good use of rhyming and expressive words. this poem really touched my heart and made me think of choobie. i would like to meet choobie. tell him ...