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Re: Stepfather
This isn't the most beautiful letter I have ever read. That was absolutely amazing. I just want to point out a couple sentences that sounded a little weird to me. ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: Just Another Day (Chapter-2)
Hey! Sky here, dropping a review per your request. I am just trying my best and giving you my suggestions, so you by no means have to listen to me. ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: The World of Telis - Prologue
Hey! Sky here to give you a review :smt001 All of the following are suggestions and you obviously don't have to listen to me if you don't want to. I ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Chronicles of Mark the 6th Grader
Hey! Sky here to try my best to "rip this up" :smt001 Just a small, quick note; all of the following are suggestions and I will not be in any ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Virus 76
Droppin' a reviewww.... all of these are suggestions. You don't have to listen to me :smt001 A virus outbreak had happened at the place. I hate reading and saying these ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: First Day of Junior High
Hey! Just here to give you a review. Please keep in mind that these are all suggestions from my part that I think will make your writing better. You by ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Prologue - Aspen Faye
Here to give you a review. I don't generally read horror but I looked at some of the comments and couldn't resist scaring myself a bit. Just going to remind ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: The Search for Answers: Entry 1
Hey! Here to write a review. This caught my attention in the green room so here it goes! Just remember that these are all suggestions form my part, so you ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Riders on Soarin-Character development practice
Dropping a review here, per your request :smt001 Again, I'm a huge Disney fan, specifially the old Disney, so I bet I'm going to love this story too. One quick ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One
Hey! Just dropping a review. This story looked interesting, so let's see if I was right. Haskell Wright studied the silver haired Asian man on his coach, gray eyes diligently ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: Kayla
This is the most adorable thing every. Your girlfriend is so lucky. This is the sweetest thing I've ever seen. I originally clicked on this just to read it because ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed chapter 1-- Red Stained Note (Edit)
Hey! Dropping a review here. Just all suggestions, don't listen to me if you don't want to :smt001 "Their clothes were tattered and stained with blood, the girl on the ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Aftershock series 1) journey to oasis
"Yes you are not from here are you?" Comma after yes. "No how you could be the only people that remain are the old or the sick you are neither." ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: The Rule of Three: Intro
"His sigh let out a mechanical hiss, from his metal mask that regulated his breathing and covered his face." No comma needed. "No trees or grass remained, only black rock ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Empty Draft
Hey! I'm here to write a review for you. Just going to give you a little reminder that these are all just suggestions :smt001 "Nothing answers except for the silence ...
Mar 8, 2017
