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I think that this was a good piece. It shows the conflict that we all go through when faced with a conflict, such as this. we all need to try ...

I like this poem. It shows the pain and anguish that our and other brave soldiers go through every day of their lives. This poem is one of those that ...

I thought you did this poem quite well. Am I right in thinking that you are describing Schitzophrenia? Please correct me if I am wrong. Also, the above comments, I ...

I happen to know what it is like to have a father who doesn't appreciate you or care. You wrote this so well that I disagree with the above statment ...

How can people be so cruel? Who would harm a child? Who would have the audacity and sheer callousness to do this? No one deserves the treatment her father gave ...

I do belive you are right! The Mass Media has too much influence over people! We are all becoming Borg-like beings with no feelings or emotions at all! If you ...

Skutter11: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!! Janitor: Oh, great! Now I have to carry this smiling body out as well! Skutter11: I'm not dead I'm in a laughing induced coma, you would be too,

Sorry, there, but you could break it down a bit. Major headache :? . Oh and I think you shouldn't listen to Rubinlikes2write, that comment was way too harsh. Anyway, ...

OK, I am going to commit literacy sacrilage and say this(sorry for breaking the rule) Harry Potter (spits in abosulute discugst). The thing is that the characters aren't that belivable, ...

Like it! Oh, by the way, uncouth Is a word. It is ,infact, of old English. Is it by chance one letter or two, because the end paragraph sounded like ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: But I actually wanted Twilight to win because I don't like Harry Potter. Still it was very funny and a very good concept! :lol: :lol: :lol: ...

I think this story shows that people bully people who aren't as big as they are. Love the twist! The murder at the end is cleverly presented in storybook form! ...

Was this, by chance, loosley based on Thomas Hardy's "The Man I Killed"? Because it seems that the main character hates having to kill this person "When you ask for ...

I think you've got a good concept from what I can see. The overall structure of this piece is interesting as well. Are you going to continue this story or ...