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Take with salt; mind the edges. I appreciate the simplicity of your cinquain, but it is somewhat superficial. I understand your form is limited, but your creativity must exceed those ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. Lux had never been to a party. She had seen them, she had heard of them on every social media site she had an ...

I'll keep in mind the below comment - these are cinquains. Take with salt; yadda yadda. Cinquain reference (for my own benefit): 1. unstressed-stressed or short-long (iambic) Then 2 stresses, ...

rubbish. ...Rubbish. Well. Be that way. Words appear to me, connotated smiles, Connotated is spelled correctly, but is perhaps poor diction. The words connote smiles. I would choose connoting over ...

It's a short poem. Single stanza. Limited. That's the feeling I get: limited, by language, mostly. EDIT: On further consideration, it was shortsighted of me to judge your poem on ...

I'm just going to break this up arbitrarily for the purpose of reviewing. Concerning the holistic structure of your poem: Single stanza, hardly punctuated? Don't sweat. If you just use ...

Certainly surreal. Take with salt; mind the edges. I like to break things down. Your biggest problem, in a technical sense, is diction. I wait on the brink, my mind ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. I can't read this without starting to review, so I'm just going to chronicle my adventure as it unfolds. First thoughts: Your narration reads, ...

R/N to your A/N: Yeah, gladly. Sorry this took so long, even after you implemented your existing revisions as per request. My usual method is reversed again (not again for ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. I'll try to review plot, but, to be frank, I'm afraid I won't have much to say. Drama's not my reviewing forte. How-ever; I ...

Take with salt; mind with care. I'll try to work on reviewing "plot and prospectivity" a little. ;) Varien stirred the coals thoughtfully*.* "Ike says that we have to support ...

(I will warn you that this piece was written EXTREMELY quickly and will have a LOT of problems. For sure!) ... Okay. Take with salt; mind the edges. Dane spun ...

This is quite well written, rather engaging. And I feel it deserves a more detailed review. Praise is always good, of course... But when it happens to me, I also ...

Very ambiguous, no idea where its going, but its the first thing I've written in a long time. If I managed to develop it, it will be quite dark, thats ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. This is not the genre of work I typically read or review, but I find myself interested anyway. I will pluck lines from your ...