skorlir

Aleyy. I like your poem. I'm going to assume your poem is purposely unclear as a foil to the name of its protagonist. I like it better that way. And ...

I recognize this writing. Not because I've read anything of yours before - to the contrary; I think I would remember reading something by "jcbutterrtoast." But I see something of ...

I hadn't heard Becky G's song before. The only song of hers I knew is from the animated movie "Hotel Transylvania," and it's hardly so emotional. What you've written is ...

Ah. Here we are. Hello again... erm, I'll call you Connie. ConverseFireGirl doesn't exactly roll off the keyboard. Hopefully you won't mind. This poem is unlike the other two I've ...

It's a brief glance. And it has body. That's like saying "it has a distinguished, mouthy crest; perhaps a woody hint - definitely oak - and it closes with a ...

I saw that you had reviewed something. Not terribly impressive, to review something. But then I saw, from your status, that you know how to use a semicolon. I became ...

The imagery is certainly varied. I have the feeling this poem either holds little meaning - and so it just rhymes nicely and is nothing more than I can see ...

The first line pulls, but its rhyme is obvious. Somewhat childish, even. Which is fine, if it suits the poem. I just don't feel it here. On a technical note, ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. Proving at Present the Countless Use of Technology This is not a correct title. What I think you mean: "The Countless Uses of Technology." ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. Grammar. I will review it. Maniac Chapter 1 Jeffrey Stevens certainly went down in history. Mmh? This is interesting; the title is trite, but ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. You have many very kind reviews. I'm here to break that trend. We were just a plain people who don’t use innovative technologies. But ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. I am Knight Skorlir and I am reviewing your work for... the competition. I'm sure it has a name. But you should know what ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. “Heart throbs eternally, mind reflects victoriously and human system cajoles euphorously for the conjointed job that resulted in winning” You make up two words ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. Captain Seuche Maratan strode across the deck of the Swan as destructive magic ripped her beloved ship apart below her. Seuche is a ridiculous ...

Take with salt; mind the edges. “Where are we going?” she yelled as they ran past the twin guard towers, their white stone stained a golden yellow by the sunlight. ...