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Thanls a lot music. I will keep rthese things in mind next time.

Yeah.......finally a fellow Percy Jackson fan.

oh thanks. Now i get all the lines better

thank you. The reason i wrote rose bushes red is so that it rhymes with bed.

thank you. I think the review did help me a lot.

thanks a lot. I realise the mistakes now since you have pointed them out.The real reason that i wrote that line is to say that we should not take such ...

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Thanks a lot i will keep in mind these tiny details next time.

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Thank you im glad you liked it.

i'm glad you liked it

i just read the reviews and comments below and the concept ha sgotten a bit more clear to me now

Thank you.I will keep these things in mind next time.

oh!I didn't realize that