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Re: A Year and a Half chapter 2
Just a review. “Uh, ya. Why?” I think it should be "Uh, yea. Why?" “Was your twin?” She emphasized that I used her name in past tense. It should be ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: THIS IS NOT A STORY dont read
This part is kind of long. Maybe you could have Robin text something in the middle. The story is okay, but it has no plot. What is the point of ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Two Friends, Two Lives, One Secret
So yea it does have spelling and grammer errors but im only reviewing it cuz im bored. but this was good keep writing. As she exchanged her books, Samantha came ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled(for now)
omg you should write more of that i love how you put like your life into the story. Am i Reese? is that why you asked if i couuld change ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: It's Were All The Drama Is chapter 2
soooo ok here it is A tall woman in a man's tailored suit strode over to us and pushed the woman away gently with her hips. Extending her flabby skinned ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: LIfE
wow this is choppy Now you may think that I'll be saying only the middle class people and up could afford these things a lot. So let me clarify things. ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: The Throne
Like I said 1,000,000,000,000 times this story is so depressing! Great writer and all but sad she killed her own daughter, now that is some messed up stuff. But since ...
Mar 17, 2009
