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Re: Nursery Rhyme
ummmmmmm check the l words once
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Only in Defense
Awesome piece ! I love the way you put some romance in a very sad poem. It has a beauty surrounding it and I think the hunter's language ( thats ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: The Girl in the Painting
YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU are a greeeeeeaaaaaaateeeeeeeeeee writer . Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu can't be explained . rather your poems can't.
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Greedy Eyes
I guess men should learn to learn. They are sometimes so unreasonable that reason seems frightening , so greedy that greed is everything , so so so .... that you ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Endless Night
Thanks everybody for such encouraging responses to my little poem. And thanks for telling me to correct my punctuation marks. I'll remember. ( hope I've used them correct here !! ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Another Somebody
You are a very mature writer with full potential . All you write has a true feel to it . You really ought to be a writer . But I ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Silent Beauty
Hey ! Its a great poem and very mature . The only minus point is that you should write why you think she is so beautiful . : -)
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Raging Silence
this poem expresses a lot about your feelings and I think short poems are most expressive .
Sep 5, 2014